Wednesday, December 5, 2012

My Plan for Final

I need to work on multiple corrections in my paper.  Also fix sentence fragments, better explaining in the paper, better introductions to my sources, more research from the Gale Virtual Reference Library and most importantly moving my thesis statement to the end of the first paragraph.  And most importantly fixing my works cited page and updating a few sources.
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  1. H FDecember 11, 2012 at 9:00 PM

    Aaron,
    How did or is your revision going? Rereading the draft that you posted, you clearly have a good understanding of the films you've chosen for your paper, but perhaps could just use some more academic sources to reinforce your argument. I think this will be a very interesting paper, and I look forward to reading your final work. Good Luck!

    -H. Freiwald
    P.S. Did you get a chance to work on the statistics assignment?

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